Made Quarter Finals - (as An Early Orange)
in Amazon Breakthrough Novel Contest 2010
Reviewer: “I particularly enjoyed his (Danny’s) imagination and seeing how ordinary occurrences could be twisted and churned in the mind of a young lonely child into horrible terrifying monstrous threats.”
Too Ugle to Love
Middle Grade
Words 75,000
Copyright © 2021 C. J. Atticus
Danny, age nine, suffering with Progeria, knows he might not turn ten. His final wish is to share a hug with his father despite believing he’s too ugly for his dad’s love. He overlooks who already loves him—mom, his sitter Carolyn, and the color orange, the sunny side of life. Danny plans to find his dad, but his declining health and a bully conspire against him. Halloween night, this bully dumps Danny in the swamp where he encounters Jawless Jack, the town’s legendary outcast rumored to “cook children’s bones.” Jack, however, is a good soul, and this rescue leads Danny to meet his dad, Dr. Mike, a heart specialist. But it shocks Danny that his father is a doctor, another source of pain. Will Danny notice his dad is as orange as he? And will a shortened life allow Danny enough time for a hug to cure everything?
Too Ugly to LoveChapter 1
Danny hated taking a bath. He couldn’t do anything he wanted. No splashing. No soap. No bubbles. No frogmen. No submarines. Nothing. If he owned a dog, he wouldn’t be able to put him in the water either. Only chalk milk. And he hated that too. See, Danny suffered under a Routine. Sure, sure, the doctor said to take it for his own good. But if his own good hurt him, why did he have to take it? Let the doctor take it, if so great. See how he liked it. Each morning before breakfast, his prescription required that he start with the Routine, soak in chalk milk. Step one: resist it. Danny wrote that himself. He stood in the middle of his bedroom like always, lips pressed tight with temper, fists rammed at his sides, determined to stall until the very last second. But he heard his mom’s bossy kitchen voice drifting up the stairs. “Are you in the bathtub, young man?” Mom yelled at the ceiling earlier than usual this morning, made him resist even more. “No!” He tightened his fists. The oven door slammed. His mom often did that, slammed things. She’d shove a chair against the kitchen table, slap closed a cabinet door, or bang a pan or two. See, she hated the Routine too. “Don’t make me come up there!” Her voice again. “Come up here. See if I care!” Slam! . . . A pot. “Daniel Wilbur Sullivan? If you expect to turn ten years old next month…” A second later . . . Heavy feet clogging up the stairs. “Okay. Okay. I’m going. I’m going.” He raced out of his room, down the hall, and closed himself up in the bathroom before the doorknob rattled from the outside. He wheezed and held his hand over his thumping heart, pleading with it to relax. The knob rocked left and right like a second hand that couldn’t decide the time. “Don’t come in, Mom. I’m too grown.” That should work. The doorknob quieted. See. “And I’m timing ten minutes,” seeped his mom’s angry voice through the door. “And we leave in forty!” “We ought to get a lock on this door, you know.” “Ten minutes!” He heard her heavy mom-feet pounding back down the stairs, vibrations rattling the banister. And if she had spotted him running in the house, or at all― Danny didn’t mean to make her mad. But his mom made an appointment today with the doctor who forced the Routine on him. He once saw a TV movie where the bad guy threatened the good guy with a sizzling hot poker, held it right up to his eye. The bad guy should have used the Routine instead. The good guy would be more than happy to tell where he’d hidden the treasure. The other reason he hated the Routine, it reminded Danny he’d never reach red. Back when still orange, his favorite nurse Ozella explained to him that people lived like leaves on a tree; born green, turned orange, then red, and at the end browned out. She said his leaf turned orange long before his autumn meant to start. This made his insides skip over red and go straight to brown; sicker on the inside than on the out. Red would have given him more time. He had no choice but to cooperate with his mother. He went on and pulled off his t-shirt, pushed down his pajama pants, and stomped both into a pile. Soon the tub water rose eight inches and steamy. He grabbed a box off the toilet back, measured out a cup of powdered medicine, then sprinkled it into his water. The smell stung his nose, like onions. After his back got wet, his cracked sores would sting too, but felt softer after soaking. He slipped toe first into the milk. After a while, Mom’s kitchen echo drifted upstairs again. “Are you watching the time?” He had. Her reminder. Now out, he patted a towel over his chest, arms, legs, and back, and pulled on the underwear and jeans she placed beside the sink. Then more Routine. He used a cotton swab to dab another white medicine on his shoulders, Mom to do his back. Before he knew it, she stood behind him, hand out, waiting for the bottle. Her crunching lips held back what she truly felt. Mad at the Routine. Not really him. Her pinched eyes and deep thinking were also part of the Routine. She concentrated while dabbing his back, but used a special gentleness, the same way her thumb soothed one of his achy knuckles. See, they often sat together in the den big chair, where they told each other secrets, sometimes just dreamed along with the roaring fire. They rarely spoke during the Routine, already knowing the same—how all this would one day end. Mom nudged his arm and turned him, not realizing what she just did. He now faced the mirror over the sink. Danny didn’t like mirrors. They showed him the truth, all of it. They reminded him why he’d never reach red. He had grown very little, still so small his nose only came up level with the counter edge. When he rose onto his tiptoes, he could see his whole head in the mirror. His front teeth poked out a little. His pale skin and forehead veins looked like blue and red lines on a road map. If he had hair on his bulgy head, he’d cut it long. School bullies called him Bulb Head. Ozella said he looked like an old wrinkled man because God made him wise to ready him for a special purpose. He hated mirrors. And he hated doctors. Back when green and his sores first appeared, Danny’s doctor made Mom soak his back in medicine that smelled and burned and made him hate her. He cried during every Routine, stomped his feet and slapped at his mom’s hands for putting him through all that. He also took a lot of pills—red ones, pink ones, ones with strange symbols. Mom lined them on his breakfast plate and cut the big ones in half. Liquid medicines left a metal taste on his tongue, which made food taste worse than the medicine. One of these days, Danny planned to be free of it all. He’d tear up his prescriptions and make confetti while he ran through the backyard. This morning, while Mom continued to dab, one of his questions slipped out, kind of casual like. Another bad part of the Routine. Danny sometimes revealed other things that hurt him. “Mom, am I too ugly to love?” He tilted his head a little left and right, gazed into the mirror where he should have eyebrows, where only blue veins spread out. Had he really reached ugly? Mom stopped dabbing, and her tense, wrinkled eyebrows relaxed. “Sweetie, what made you ask that? I love you.” “I know that.” She dabbed more. “You’re beautiful, and a lot of people love you.” “Mom, boys aren’t beautiful. They’re handsome, and we don’t know a lot of people.” She seemed to forget they lived in the country, so far out of town that the school bus wouldn’t reach here. Or maybe because of him. “Let me guess who started this. That Dewalt boy.” “Uh-huh.” “I’m going over to his house and pin back his ears. Mother’s, too.” Danny wished she hadn’t mentioned ears. Now he noticed his. “Mom, you’ll make Dewalt meaner. He might actually hit me.” “Well, I can’t just stand back—” “Yes, you can.” He wouldn’t be surprised if Dewalt turned out to be the doctor’s son—Tormentor and Mini-Tormentor. Not all sixth-graders were so vicious. But Dewalt ruled the Gang of Three, his school’s most infamous bad guys. He hated Dewalt. He didn’t know why hate came so easily these days. He tried hard to live by the meaning of orange, God-fearing and sunny. Ozella said being a good boy had always been his most endearing quality. He guessed he didn’t really feel hate, just frustration, since he had no power to change anything. But he definitely hated the Routine and nothing wrong with doing that. Mom straightened her back and held out her right hand splattered with medicine. Danny could see her eyes widen like they did whenever she got a backfiring idea. Mom knew nothing about dealing with bullies. “I can talk to your principal,” she bragged. “You do, and I’ll run away from home.” “Danny Sullivan, don’t even joke about that.” “I mean it, Mom.” “Okay, okay.” She gave his arm a gentle pat. “You’re done. Now get dressed. We’re short on time.” She stayed and cleaned up his bathroom mess, tub ring, too. Before he walked out into the hall, he knew they were headed for a screaming match because he still didn’t want to go to town. He’d rather stay in his room, the only place in the world where he’d be safe. And normal. See, he kept his room how he liked it: toys and games everywhere, Superman posters tacked on the walls, and bed unmade. He liked to play army and wear a green helmet. His yardstick transformed into a rifle or sword or bazooka or atomic blaster, and he fought off pirates, aliens, even hordes of Dewalts. The mattress edge became his trench, and he spied over the pillow sandbags with his trusty weapon loaded for bear. Then he’d come out blasting, mowed down the invaders as they raced across his carpet. Sometimes at night he woke his mom, and behind the wall she’d yell, “Daniel Wilbur Sullivan, don’t make me come in there.” He’d scurry back to his bed, climb up, and peek over the covers in case any aliens still lurked in his room. Of course, he did serious stuff, too—finished homework, kept a computer diary, sat in his window and watched nature. Last summer, he made his biggest wish ever when the moon glowed its brightest blue―earn a hug from his dad, but he hadn’t met him yet. This wish would come true, and he had faith. He planned to find him and surprise his mom. Danny heard his mother rushing around in her room next door, bumped the dresser, slammed a drawer. Maybe he could slow her down. Gosh, mustard still stained his unwashed favorite shirt. The scissors accidentally fell out of his hand and cut his shoelaces. His clock battery ran dry. No, he’d tried them too many times before. Any minute now, he expected to hear his full name called. He gave in and tugged an orange turtleneck shirt over his bald head. While on the floor for orange socks and black sneakers, the other reason he acted so obstinately already sent him into panic mode. Monsters. All around him. Rapping occurred at his door; Mom’s knuckles. Her voice through the wood said, “Did you brush your teeth?” “Not yet.” He didn’t care about his teeth. He worried about Jawless Jack, the swamp ogre. See, to reach town, he and his mom must drive . . . “Take care of it. We leave in ten.” The scariest part, Jack lived behind Danny’s house, across the backfield and in the Black Swamp. The bridge into town crossed that swamp. Jack would be out there, wading through the greasy water or lurking behind a slimy green tree. Dewalt told him about the monster during the first day of the second grade. Dewalt hunted him down at recess, sang his stupid made-up song. “Jack, Jack cooks your meat…chops you neat…eats your feet.” Danny didn’t want to become spareribs. Here he approached his tenth birthday, a month away, on Halloween day, as a big boy, and he still believed in monsters. He’d turned yellow, the color of scared. “Mom, can we take the scenic ride to town? John’s Creek bridge?” He waited and listened. “Mom?” Her downstairs voice replied with, “Too far south. Hurry now, please.” She said ‘please,’ which always motivated him. He went on into the bathroom, worrying the whole way about the other monsters he’d run into while in town. Like Doc Pickett for one. He collected bones, teeth actually, lined them up across the top of his rolltop desk. And Dewalt, the leader of the Game of Three. He broke bones, even pulled little kids’ arms out of sockets. Danny reached over the sink, grabbed his toothbrush, and applied paste. But as he brushed, he couldn’t help staring into the bathroom mirror. For in the reflection stood the most terrifying monster of them all. One the townsfolk of Oakdale would throw rocks at and chase him into the Black Swamp, right into Jawless Jack’s bowling caldron of hot grease. That monster was himself.
Danny hated taking a bath. He couldn’t do anything he wanted. No splashing. No soap. No bubbles. No frogmen. No submarines. Nothing. If he owned a dog, he wouldn’t be able to put him in the water either. Only chalk milk. And he hated that too. See, Danny suffered under a Routine. Sure, sure, the doctor said to take it for his own good. But if his own good hurt him, why did he have to take it? Let the doctor take it, if so great. See how he liked it. Each morning before breakfast, his prescription required that he start with the Routine, soak in chalk milk. Step one: resist it. Danny wrote that himself. He stood in the middle of his bedroom like always, lips pressed tight with temper, fists rammed at his sides, determined to stall until the very last second. But he heard his mom’s bossy kitchen voice drifting up the stairs. “Are you in the bathtub, young man?” Mom yelled at the ceiling earlier than usual this morning, made him resist even more. “No!” He tightened his fists. The oven door slammed. His mom often did that, slammed things. She’d shove a chair against the kitchen table, slap closed a cabinet door, or bang a pan or two. See, she hated the Routine too. “Don’t make me come up there!” Her voice again. “Come up here. See if I care!” Slam! . . . A pot. “Daniel Wilbur Sullivan? If you expect to turn ten years old next month…” A second later . . . Heavy feet clogging up the stairs. “Okay. Okay. I’m going. I’m going.” He raced out of his room, down the hall, and closed himself up in the bathroom before the doorknob rattled from the outside. He wheezed and held his hand over his thumping heart, pleading with it to relax. The knob rocked left and right like a second hand that couldn’t decide the time. “Don’t come in, Mom. I’m too grown.” That should work. The doorknob quieted. See. “And I’m timing ten minutes,” seeped his mom’s angry voice through the door. “And we leave in forty!” “We ought to get a lock on this door, you know.” “Ten minutes!” He heard her heavy mom-feet pounding back down the stairs, vibrations rattling the banister. And if she had spotted him running in the house, or at all― Danny didn’t mean to make her mad. But his mom made an appointment today with the doctor who forced the Routine on him. He once saw a TV movie where the bad guy threatened the good guy with a sizzling hot poker, held it right up to his eye. The bad guy should have used the Routine instead. The good guy would be more than happy to tell where he’d hidden the treasure. The other reason he hated the Routine, it reminded Danny he’d never reach red. Back when still orange, his favorite nurse Ozella explained to him that people lived like leaves on a tree; born green, turned orange, then red, and at the end browned out. She said his leaf turned orange long before his autumn meant to start. This made his insides skip over red and go straight to brown; sicker on the inside than on the out. Red would have given him more time. He had no choice but to cooperate with his mother. He went on and pulled off his t-shirt, pushed down his pajama pants, and stomped both into a pile. Soon the tub water rose eight inches and steamy. He grabbed a box off the toilet back, measured out a cup of powdered medicine, then sprinkled it into his water. The smell stung his nose, like onions. After his back got wet, his cracked sores would sting too, but felt softer after soaking. He slipped toe first into the milk. After a while, Mom’s kitchen echo drifted upstairs again. “Are you watching the time?” He had. Her reminder. Now out, he patted a towel over his chest, arms, legs, and back, and pulled on the underwear and jeans she placed beside the sink. Then more Routine. He used a cotton swab to dab another white medicine on his shoulders, Mom to do his back. Before he knew it, she stood behind him, hand out, waiting for the bottle. Her crunching lips held back what she truly felt. Mad at the Routine. Not really him. Her pinched eyes and deep thinking were also part of the Routine. She concentrated while dabbing his back, but used a special gentleness, the same way her thumb soothed one of his achy knuckles. See, they often sat together in the den big chair, where they told each other secrets, sometimes just dreamed along with the roaring fire. They rarely spoke during the Routine, already knowing the same—how all this would one day end. Mom nudged his arm and turned him, not realizing what she just did. He now faced the mirror over the sink. Danny didn’t like mirrors. They showed him the truth, all of it. They reminded him why he’d never reach red. He had grown very little, still so small his nose only came up level with the counter edge. When he rose onto his tiptoes, he could see his whole head in the mirror. His front teeth poked out a little. His pale skin and forehead veins looked like blue and red lines on a road map. If he had hair on his bulgy head, he’d cut it long. School bullies called him Bulb Head. Ozella said he looked like an old wrinkled man because God made him wise to ready him for a special purpose. He hated mirrors. And he hated doctors. Back when green and his sores first appeared, Danny’s doctor made Mom soak his back in medicine that smelled and burned and made him hate her. He cried during every Routine, stomped his feet and slapped at his mom’s hands for putting him through all that. He also took a lot of pills—red ones, pink ones, ones with strange symbols. Mom lined them on his breakfast plate and cut the big ones in half. Liquid medicines left a metal taste on his tongue, which made food taste worse than the medicine. One of these days, Danny planned to be free of it all. He’d tear up his prescriptions and make confetti while he ran through the backyard. This morning, while Mom continued to dab, one of his questions slipped out, kind of casual like. Another bad part of the Routine. Danny sometimes revealed other things that hurt him. “Mom, am I too ugly to love?” He tilted his head a little left and right, gazed into the mirror where he should have eyebrows, where only blue veins spread out. Had he really reached ugly? Mom stopped dabbing, and her tense, wrinkled eyebrows relaxed. “Sweetie, what made you ask that? I love you.” “I know that.” She dabbed more. “You’re beautiful, and a lot of people love you.” “Mom, boys aren’t beautiful. They’re handsome, and we don’t know a lot of people.” She seemed to forget they lived in the country, so far out of town that the school bus wouldn’t reach here. Or maybe because of him. “Let me guess who started this. That Dewalt boy.” “Uh-huh.” “I’m going over to his house and pin back his ears. Mother’s, too.” Danny wished she hadn’t mentioned ears. Now he noticed his. “Mom, you’ll make Dewalt meaner. He might actually hit me.” “Well, I can’t just stand back—” “Yes, you can.” He wouldn’t be surprised if Dewalt turned out to be the doctor’s son—Tormentor and Mini-Tormentor. Not all sixth-graders were so vicious. But Dewalt ruled the Gang of Three, his school’s most infamous bad guys. He hated Dewalt. He didn’t know why hate came so easily these days. He tried hard to live by the meaning of orange, God-fearing and sunny. Ozella said being a good boy had always been his most endearing quality. He guessed he didn’t really feel hate, just frustration, since he had no power to change anything. But he definitely hated the Routine and nothing wrong with doing that. Mom straightened her back and held out her right hand splattered with medicine. Danny could see her eyes widen like they did whenever she got a backfiring idea. Mom knew nothing about dealing with bullies. “I can talk to your principal,” she bragged. “You do, and I’ll run away from home.” “Danny Sullivan, don’t even joke about that.” “I mean it, Mom.” “Okay, okay.” She gave his arm a gentle pat. “You’re done. Now get dressed. We’re short on time.” She stayed and cleaned up his bathroom mess, tub ring, too. Before he walked out into the hall, he knew they were headed for a screaming match because he still didn’t want to go to town. He’d rather stay in his room, the only place in the world where he’d be safe. And normal. See, he kept his room how he liked it: toys and games everywhere, Superman posters tacked on the walls, and bed unmade. He liked to play army and wear a green helmet. His yardstick transformed into a rifle or sword or bazooka or atomic blaster, and he fought off pirates, aliens, even hordes of Dewalts. The mattress edge became his trench, and he spied over the pillow sandbags with his trusty weapon loaded for bear. Then he’d come out blasting, mowed down the invaders as they raced across his carpet. Sometimes at night he woke his mom, and behind the wall she’d yell, “Daniel Wilbur Sullivan, don’t make me come in there.” He’d scurry back to his bed, climb up, and peek over the covers in case any aliens still lurked in his room. Of course, he did serious stuff, too—finished homework, kept a computer diary, sat in his window and watched nature. Last summer, he made his biggest wish ever when the moon glowed its brightest blue―earn a hug from his dad, but he hadn’t met him yet. This wish would come true, and he had faith. He planned to find him and surprise his mom. Danny heard his mother rushing around in her room next door, bumped the dresser, slammed a drawer. Maybe he could slow her down. Gosh, mustard still stained his unwashed favorite shirt. The scissors accidentally fell out of his hand and cut his shoelaces. His clock battery ran dry. No, he’d tried them too many times before. Any minute now, he expected to hear his full name called. He gave in and tugged an orange turtleneck shirt over his bald head. While on the floor for orange socks and black sneakers, the other reason he acted so obstinately already sent him into panic mode. Monsters. All around him. Rapping occurred at his door; Mom’s knuckles. Her voice through the wood said, “Did you brush your teeth?” “Not yet.” He didn’t care about his teeth. He worried about Jawless Jack, the swamp ogre. See, to reach town, he and his mom must drive . . . “Take care of it. We leave in ten.” The scariest part, Jack lived behind Danny’s house, across the backfield and in the Black Swamp. The bridge into town crossed that swamp. Jack would be out there, wading through the greasy water or lurking behind a slimy green tree. Dewalt told him about the monster during the first day of the second grade. Dewalt hunted him down at recess, sang his stupid made-up song. “Jack, Jack cooks your meat…chops you neat…eats your feet.” Danny didn’t want to become spareribs. Here he approached his tenth birthday, a month away, on Halloween day, as a big boy, and he still believed in monsters. He’d turned yellow, the color of scared. “Mom, can we take the scenic ride to town? John’s Creek bridge?” He waited and listened. “Mom?” Her downstairs voice replied with, “Too far south. Hurry now, please.” She said ‘please,’ which always motivated him. He went on into the bathroom, worrying the whole way about the other monsters he’d run into while in town. Like Doc Pickett for one. He collected bones, teeth actually, lined them up across the top of his rolltop desk. And Dewalt, the leader of the Game of Three. He broke bones, even pulled little kids’ arms out of sockets. Danny reached over the sink, grabbed his toothbrush, and applied paste. But as he brushed, he couldn’t help staring into the bathroom mirror. For in the reflection stood the most terrifying monster of them all. One the townsfolk of Oakdale would throw rocks at and chase him into the Black Swamp, right into Jawless Jack’s bowling caldron of hot grease. That monster was himself.
Ganache and Godiva
Romance
Words 73,000
Copyright © 2021 C. J. Atticus
Ron Titan, an over-sexed heir to a vast chocolate empire, has two passions: sex and chocolate. Love is a vague idea until he meets two unique girls—Angelique, a demure goddess in a sleek, white cocktail dress, and Mary Gossett, a redheaded firecracker with almond-shaped gray eyes. The girls can’t be more different and Ron can only have one.
First, he chases the girl in white only to discover she’s a glamorous enigma only interested in breaking hearts. Mary, however, is a spunky small town girl defending her little bakery from Ron’s invading chocolate shop. He can’t help but fall for her. But after uncovering Mary’s astonishing and never-imagined secret, he’s challenged—he could destroy her career in favor of his. But what about love? Ron is about to swallow the hardest candy of all. Scruples.
First, he chases the girl in white only to discover she’s a glamorous enigma only interested in breaking hearts. Mary, however, is a spunky small town girl defending her little bakery from Ron’s invading chocolate shop. He can’t help but fall for her. But after uncovering Mary’s astonishing and never-imagined secret, he’s challenged—he could destroy her career in favor of his. But what about love? Ron is about to swallow the hardest candy of all. Scruples.
Ganache and GodivaChapter 1
The moment chocolate touched her lips I fell in love. And it was the way she worked that piece of nugget that grabbed my heart. She sat on a stool of a portable bar rolled out to serve the other ticket holders, and with her forefinger and thumb she held a chocolate morsel, perhaps cream-filled, to her wonderful red lips that pressed, searched, and savored within a coy grin. She giggled as three tuxedo clad waiters elbowed each other and enticed her with silver serving trays lined with more chocolates. She taunted these boys by raising one knee a bit too high as she shifted her crossed legs, loving the attention. Waiters in New York interested in a woman? That right there proved her hypnotic prowess. She wore a hip-hugging white cocktail dress that plunged into a V-style front―a healthy deep front, I might add. A wide brim, white laced hat hid her tucked hair while drooping just enough to share a glimpse of her white sunglasses. I had a thing for those as well. But something about this girl said there was more to her than just being a beautiful plaything. I needed to understand why this time my libido had been challenged with what could be interpreted as respectable intentions. For me, that’s saying a lot. But could I handle her? I’d never loved anyone, except for my parents, which was difficult to do at times. This young woman I’d been watching made me feel she needed my protection, especially from guys like me. All I ever cared about was slipping into the “candy store,” and a box of chocolates accomplished that, or an occasional diamond. Still, she represented my two favorite subjects, chocolate―my profession—and sex―my recreation. Being a connoisseur of both, I could tell she obviously adored them as well. I liked a girl who knew how to explore the aphrodisiac effect, really got off on it, you know. As a young executive attending this National Chocolate Artisan Contest to scope out the other chocolatiers and their sculptures, I had been leaning against a column to observe the crowded convention lobby when I noticed the girl’s talent. I thought about what I would say to her though she was already an expert, in more ways than one. Hold it on your tongue. Let the delicacy melt before you smear the paste over the roof of your mouth. Okay, press and hold it there. That’s it. Close your eyes and seek the cinnamon, the coffee, the vanilla, the chili, or whatever exotic flavor that inspired you. Now swallow, but delicately, don’t choke. If your eyes roll back into your head, live with it. That’s the whole point. But who was she? I’d been coming to this annual convention for three years and had never seen her here before. Maybe she was a model in town for a photo shoot with a glamorous fashion magazine. Maybe she was an actress, someone famous behind those sunglasses or an undiscovered starlet willing to trade a little bump-and-tickle with a movie producer for a screen test. Perhaps she was a father’s little girl playing grownup in her mother’s favorite dress, or a spoiled kept one waiting on her sugar daddy to join her for margaritas. She was a mystery. A good one, too. A lovely, voluptuous tease who delighted in making the other women in this room envy her while raising the blood pressure of every man around her, especially mine. My heart was about to explode, but she could kill me, over and over. I didn’t need blood in my brain. Perhaps I should become a movie mogul or at least have a business card claiming to be one. Thanks to her luscious lips, though, my day’s focus had been ruined. At 3 a.m. this morning I left my Vermont apartment and actually rode a crowded bus all the way into upper Manhattan. I hadn’t been on a bus since my frat boy days when my brothers and I rode into Stamford and trashed their snooty Squash Club. I could have driven but I decided to save the money rather than pay for gas, tolls, and downtown parking. I could have easily afforded all of it, but since I opened a small business, cash, for once in my life, had become a precious commodity. My shop was also the reason I attended this contest. The event had launched many chocolatiers into the limelight, and I planned to enter next year’s competition, announced as the series last, for the win. It’d bring extra attention to my store, plus it would resolve a little dispute I’ve had with my father who didn’t believe the marketplace had a sustainable appetite for fine chocolates. I planned to prove him wrong. If along the way I deflated the man’s ego, even a little, which he deserved, so be it. I had been admiring a rose bush sculpted with the most fragile chocolate flower petals and figuring out how to mold them when I spotted the girl in white. Now I couldn’t think of anything but her red lips. I only needed to walk over and say hello, charm her with my wit, show her my hot-blooded face. She wasn’t out of my league. Even if she didn’t care for me, it’d still be fun watching her lips tell me to butter my thumb, shove it up my rectum, and set myself to spinning. Or I could be clever, of course, slip up behind her, pretend to be a waiter, and ask, “Ma’am, cognac cream filled truffle?” I hoped she liked white chocolate. If she preferred hers dark, I was dead. I straightened my tie and wrapped my raincoat over my arm. How was my breath? I cupped one hand over my mouth and nose. Raspberry. Not bad. Okay, I’d go for broke. The only harm was not trying. I took two paces, maybe three when a portly man wearing a too-tight blue suit stepped into my path. His frizzy windblown comb-over made his head twice the size it should be. He blocked my view of the girl in white. “Ron Titan!” the guy bellowed, happy face blown up like a balloon. “It is you.” Not now, I screamed in my head. Not now! “Mr. Hammond, hello.” He took my hand and shook it until my jaw rattled like his jowls. He was an okay Joe, a sales rep for an importer specializing in Malaysian alkalized cocoa powders used in premium drink mixes. A little pushy for my taste. He’d been selling to my old man’s corporation since I was a kid. “Little Ronnie Titan,” he said as I got my wrecked hand back, flexing my throbbing fingers. “Grown up tall and strong like your father. I haven’t seen you since you returned from college. That’s what, four years now?” “Yes, sir, it’s been―” I leaned left to see the girl but Hammond’s big head remained in my way. “How’s everything at Titan Foods, the number six confectionary in the nation? That’s quite an accomplishment for your family and a great account for me. A Titan Bar is still my favorite. How’s your dad? I’m due to see him next month.” “He’s fine, sir. He’s―” I leaned right and Hammond did the same. “Has he been on the back nine lately? We used to deuce up all the time.” “I don’t think so. He’s―” I rocked left again. He weaved left. “Sand traps were his nemesis. He bends a five iron over his knee faster than any man I’ve known. Say, how goes the job? You’re never around during my quarterly visits. Not hiding from me, are you?” “Of course not. I was assigned . . . um, responsible for―” Get out of my way, fool. I can’t see the girl. “Bet you’re making your old man proud. How’s your mom?” “She’s doing great. She’s―” “Nice lady, full of patience.” Hammond winked. “You know your father. So what brings you here, Ronnie? I didn’t know you went out for events like this.” “I’m checking out the competition, you know, undercover.” Hammond pressed a hand against my arm as he hunched his shoulders. “Uh-oh, I just noticed your name tag. Ron Sheridan. That’s your mom’s maiden name. I’m spoiling something, aren’t I?” What an idiot! I finally got my arm back. “I bet your father sent you here,” Hammond said. “That man covers all the bases. Years ago when he was searching for a new distributor . . .” I caught a glimpse of the girl in white stepping down from her stool. Was she leaving? Please, not yet. She glided toward the exit with her nose up and hips swaying left and right to irritate the huddled ladies busily hating her perfect curves. The waiters followed along like hungry puppies pawing all over each other. I couldn’t let her get away, not now, especially after falling for her. I at least needed to know her name, hear her voice, smell her chocolate breath. “. . . forklift spikes,” Hammond continued, “can do a lot of damage to soft cartons.” “Sorry, Mr. Hammond, gotta run!” I stepped around Mr. Annoying and weaved through the crowd of champagne sipping chocolate munchers—the common people. I grabbed and nudged aside a few shoulders as I aimed for the exit. The girl in white reached the concierge who appeared to be as captivated with her as the waiters. Wow, now that was a nice backside. She probably worked out. Her white dress wrapped around all the important curves. Wish I had been born a wrinkle. The concierge appeared to ask her a question, and she flattened her right hand up against her chest as if to say, “Little old me?” He pulled out a small book and held it for her, then handed over a pen. She was signing an autograph. Excellent. Afterwards, she floated through the revolving doors, leaving the man to shoo away the disappointed and abandoned waiters crashing into the podium. I had to hurry. Fire! Fire! I wish I could yell. Everyone out of my way! Finally I bumped through the doors and darted into the chilly September morning. The girl had settled into the back seat of a cab, pulling away from the curb and leaving only a fleeting glimpse of her white sunglasses and red lips visible through the rain drizzled window. She left me standing on the bustling sidewalk with my left hand high in the air, “you forgot something” stuck in my throat, and disappointment bashing me in the breeze. Too late to hail another cab. Hers had disappeared into the blurry yellow stream. And like that, the most perfect young woman I’d ever seen rode out of my life. I sighed and lowered my arm. All I could do . . . Hey, the concierge― I just about mowed down an exiting couple as I pushed back through the door, knocking them into the glass, the man’s gesturing finger sweeping through my peripheral vision. “Excuse me,” I said to the startled concierge. “Yes, sir, may I help you?” “Absolutely. You might save my life.” “Are you ill, sir? Shall I call Emergency?” He reached for the phone. “No, no, nothing like that. But please, look in your autograph book and tell me the young lady’s name, the girl in the white dress.” “You recognized her, too?” “Uh, sure, sure, I just can’t recall her name.” The man recovered the small book and thumbed through several pages. He found the correct signature but stared at the writing. “That’s funny. She’s not who I thought she was.” He handed me the book which I groped as I focused on the name and delicate calligraphy, my dream about to come true. Angelique . . . Angelique? “What the hell do I do now?”
The moment chocolate touched her lips I fell in love. And it was the way she worked that piece of nugget that grabbed my heart. She sat on a stool of a portable bar rolled out to serve the other ticket holders, and with her forefinger and thumb she held a chocolate morsel, perhaps cream-filled, to her wonderful red lips that pressed, searched, and savored within a coy grin. She giggled as three tuxedo clad waiters elbowed each other and enticed her with silver serving trays lined with more chocolates. She taunted these boys by raising one knee a bit too high as she shifted her crossed legs, loving the attention. Waiters in New York interested in a woman? That right there proved her hypnotic prowess. She wore a hip-hugging white cocktail dress that plunged into a V-style front―a healthy deep front, I might add. A wide brim, white laced hat hid her tucked hair while drooping just enough to share a glimpse of her white sunglasses. I had a thing for those as well. But something about this girl said there was more to her than just being a beautiful plaything. I needed to understand why this time my libido had been challenged with what could be interpreted as respectable intentions. For me, that’s saying a lot. But could I handle her? I’d never loved anyone, except for my parents, which was difficult to do at times. This young woman I’d been watching made me feel she needed my protection, especially from guys like me. All I ever cared about was slipping into the “candy store,” and a box of chocolates accomplished that, or an occasional diamond. Still, she represented my two favorite subjects, chocolate―my profession—and sex―my recreation. Being a connoisseur of both, I could tell she obviously adored them as well. I liked a girl who knew how to explore the aphrodisiac effect, really got off on it, you know. As a young executive attending this National Chocolate Artisan Contest to scope out the other chocolatiers and their sculptures, I had been leaning against a column to observe the crowded convention lobby when I noticed the girl’s talent. I thought about what I would say to her though she was already an expert, in more ways than one. Hold it on your tongue. Let the delicacy melt before you smear the paste over the roof of your mouth. Okay, press and hold it there. That’s it. Close your eyes and seek the cinnamon, the coffee, the vanilla, the chili, or whatever exotic flavor that inspired you. Now swallow, but delicately, don’t choke. If your eyes roll back into your head, live with it. That’s the whole point. But who was she? I’d been coming to this annual convention for three years and had never seen her here before. Maybe she was a model in town for a photo shoot with a glamorous fashion magazine. Maybe she was an actress, someone famous behind those sunglasses or an undiscovered starlet willing to trade a little bump-and-tickle with a movie producer for a screen test. Perhaps she was a father’s little girl playing grownup in her mother’s favorite dress, or a spoiled kept one waiting on her sugar daddy to join her for margaritas. She was a mystery. A good one, too. A lovely, voluptuous tease who delighted in making the other women in this room envy her while raising the blood pressure of every man around her, especially mine. My heart was about to explode, but she could kill me, over and over. I didn’t need blood in my brain. Perhaps I should become a movie mogul or at least have a business card claiming to be one. Thanks to her luscious lips, though, my day’s focus had been ruined. At 3 a.m. this morning I left my Vermont apartment and actually rode a crowded bus all the way into upper Manhattan. I hadn’t been on a bus since my frat boy days when my brothers and I rode into Stamford and trashed their snooty Squash Club. I could have driven but I decided to save the money rather than pay for gas, tolls, and downtown parking. I could have easily afforded all of it, but since I opened a small business, cash, for once in my life, had become a precious commodity. My shop was also the reason I attended this contest. The event had launched many chocolatiers into the limelight, and I planned to enter next year’s competition, announced as the series last, for the win. It’d bring extra attention to my store, plus it would resolve a little dispute I’ve had with my father who didn’t believe the marketplace had a sustainable appetite for fine chocolates. I planned to prove him wrong. If along the way I deflated the man’s ego, even a little, which he deserved, so be it. I had been admiring a rose bush sculpted with the most fragile chocolate flower petals and figuring out how to mold them when I spotted the girl in white. Now I couldn’t think of anything but her red lips. I only needed to walk over and say hello, charm her with my wit, show her my hot-blooded face. She wasn’t out of my league. Even if she didn’t care for me, it’d still be fun watching her lips tell me to butter my thumb, shove it up my rectum, and set myself to spinning. Or I could be clever, of course, slip up behind her, pretend to be a waiter, and ask, “Ma’am, cognac cream filled truffle?” I hoped she liked white chocolate. If she preferred hers dark, I was dead. I straightened my tie and wrapped my raincoat over my arm. How was my breath? I cupped one hand over my mouth and nose. Raspberry. Not bad. Okay, I’d go for broke. The only harm was not trying. I took two paces, maybe three when a portly man wearing a too-tight blue suit stepped into my path. His frizzy windblown comb-over made his head twice the size it should be. He blocked my view of the girl in white. “Ron Titan!” the guy bellowed, happy face blown up like a balloon. “It is you.” Not now, I screamed in my head. Not now! “Mr. Hammond, hello.” He took my hand and shook it until my jaw rattled like his jowls. He was an okay Joe, a sales rep for an importer specializing in Malaysian alkalized cocoa powders used in premium drink mixes. A little pushy for my taste. He’d been selling to my old man’s corporation since I was a kid. “Little Ronnie Titan,” he said as I got my wrecked hand back, flexing my throbbing fingers. “Grown up tall and strong like your father. I haven’t seen you since you returned from college. That’s what, four years now?” “Yes, sir, it’s been―” I leaned left to see the girl but Hammond’s big head remained in my way. “How’s everything at Titan Foods, the number six confectionary in the nation? That’s quite an accomplishment for your family and a great account for me. A Titan Bar is still my favorite. How’s your dad? I’m due to see him next month.” “He’s fine, sir. He’s―” I leaned right and Hammond did the same. “Has he been on the back nine lately? We used to deuce up all the time.” “I don’t think so. He’s―” I rocked left again. He weaved left. “Sand traps were his nemesis. He bends a five iron over his knee faster than any man I’ve known. Say, how goes the job? You’re never around during my quarterly visits. Not hiding from me, are you?” “Of course not. I was assigned . . . um, responsible for―” Get out of my way, fool. I can’t see the girl. “Bet you’re making your old man proud. How’s your mom?” “She’s doing great. She’s―” “Nice lady, full of patience.” Hammond winked. “You know your father. So what brings you here, Ronnie? I didn’t know you went out for events like this.” “I’m checking out the competition, you know, undercover.” Hammond pressed a hand against my arm as he hunched his shoulders. “Uh-oh, I just noticed your name tag. Ron Sheridan. That’s your mom’s maiden name. I’m spoiling something, aren’t I?” What an idiot! I finally got my arm back. “I bet your father sent you here,” Hammond said. “That man covers all the bases. Years ago when he was searching for a new distributor . . .” I caught a glimpse of the girl in white stepping down from her stool. Was she leaving? Please, not yet. She glided toward the exit with her nose up and hips swaying left and right to irritate the huddled ladies busily hating her perfect curves. The waiters followed along like hungry puppies pawing all over each other. I couldn’t let her get away, not now, especially after falling for her. I at least needed to know her name, hear her voice, smell her chocolate breath. “. . . forklift spikes,” Hammond continued, “can do a lot of damage to soft cartons.” “Sorry, Mr. Hammond, gotta run!” I stepped around Mr. Annoying and weaved through the crowd of champagne sipping chocolate munchers—the common people. I grabbed and nudged aside a few shoulders as I aimed for the exit. The girl in white reached the concierge who appeared to be as captivated with her as the waiters. Wow, now that was a nice backside. She probably worked out. Her white dress wrapped around all the important curves. Wish I had been born a wrinkle. The concierge appeared to ask her a question, and she flattened her right hand up against her chest as if to say, “Little old me?” He pulled out a small book and held it for her, then handed over a pen. She was signing an autograph. Excellent. Afterwards, she floated through the revolving doors, leaving the man to shoo away the disappointed and abandoned waiters crashing into the podium. I had to hurry. Fire! Fire! I wish I could yell. Everyone out of my way! Finally I bumped through the doors and darted into the chilly September morning. The girl had settled into the back seat of a cab, pulling away from the curb and leaving only a fleeting glimpse of her white sunglasses and red lips visible through the rain drizzled window. She left me standing on the bustling sidewalk with my left hand high in the air, “you forgot something” stuck in my throat, and disappointment bashing me in the breeze. Too late to hail another cab. Hers had disappeared into the blurry yellow stream. And like that, the most perfect young woman I’d ever seen rode out of my life. I sighed and lowered my arm. All I could do . . . Hey, the concierge― I just about mowed down an exiting couple as I pushed back through the door, knocking them into the glass, the man’s gesturing finger sweeping through my peripheral vision. “Excuse me,” I said to the startled concierge. “Yes, sir, may I help you?” “Absolutely. You might save my life.” “Are you ill, sir? Shall I call Emergency?” He reached for the phone. “No, no, nothing like that. But please, look in your autograph book and tell me the young lady’s name, the girl in the white dress.” “You recognized her, too?” “Uh, sure, sure, I just can’t recall her name.” The man recovered the small book and thumbed through several pages. He found the correct signature but stared at the writing. “That’s funny. She’s not who I thought she was.” He handed me the book which I groped as I focused on the name and delicate calligraphy, my dream about to come true. Angelique . . . Angelique? “What the hell do I do now?”
What I Did for Love
Romance/Suspense - LGBTQ
Written in Own Voice
Words 60,000Copyright © 2021 C. J. Atticus
Troy Matthews, eighteen, buses into New York determined to win a role in A Chorus Line. But his resume is blank; no paid gigs, no TV commercials, inadequate small-town training. But he’s a natural and survives round one eliminations. While awaiting round two, his awakening sexual urges lead him to take risks; visits a leather bar, X-rated bookstore, the Central Park bushes. He's still too timid to give up his virginity. But after surviving the next audition round, he steps out of his frigid shell.
See, he’s has been lusting over a fine teen boy sunbathing on the neighboring building roof. As love blossoms for both, Troy suspects this boy is not what he appears to be. As Troy unravels the mystery, the truth leaves Troy disturbed and with a terrible choice. Either give him up to protect the boy’s identity, or sacrifice dance to stay with him. He can’t do both.
See, he’s has been lusting over a fine teen boy sunbathing on the neighboring building roof. As love blossoms for both, Troy suspects this boy is not what he appears to be. As Troy unravels the mystery, the truth leaves Troy disturbed and with a terrible choice. Either give him up to protect the boy’s identity, or sacrifice dance to stay with him. He can’t do both.
What I Did for LovePart 1 (Partial)Apple A Day
“You're going to be the only virgin in New York.” My mother gasped when my precocious twelve-year-old sister attempted to embarrass me. So what if it was true, well, mostly true. Of course, I'd never reveal anything so intimate to my mother who still believed in her little boy's innocence, her so-called straight perfect boy. But I was not little anymore. For I held in my hand the bus ticket to my destiny. Ellijay to Manhattan. 6:53 PM. Tuesday. One Way. Me, Troy Matthews, a week out of high school and already Broadway bound with an overstuffed duffel bag in hand, a song in my heart, and rhythm in my feet. My calling came at age six thanks to our new cable converter. I never knew so many movies about it existed: Seven Brides for Seven Brothers, West Side Story, Singing in the Rain, Billy Elliot, Grease. But when A Chorus Line came on, heaven opened up. My mystery of life became my anthem, my reason for being, for living—dance. Ah, how I loved to dance. The freedom, the thrill, the joy. Maybe I caught the bug at birth. Contemporary. Jazz. Ballet. Ballroom. Hip-hop. I could do it all. I felt as Billy Elliot—“Flying like a bird, like electricity. Yeah, like electricity.” I was honored to spend my life on fire. And last month when I read a New York national touring company was offering auditions for A Chorus Line dancers, all ages welcomed? Bam—count me in. Nothing could stop me from attending. Not even my mother's tears. “Vera?” scolded my mom. She fought the public meltdown, heartbroken, first born leaving home. Her puffy red eyes betrayed her. Chiding Vera was a welcomed cover. But she understood my reasoning for going. You must become the man you were meant to be. She'd never again be able to kiss my boo-boos. “I heard it on TV.” “We're cutting the cord, young lady.” “There's always radio.” My sister the wild child. I was always the studious one, the kid with a clear goal and conscience, the rock of the family. Not my sister. Vera could swindle the pitchfork out of the Devil's hand. Then kick his ass out of the throne. I knew her future; a punk rock singer. But I was as blatant, not just dipping a toe into the larger world but blindly leaping headfirst, though I knew, with every fiber of my body, that I was born to be a Broadway dancer. Sure it was a short career, ten years, fifteen at the most, but there was always directing. And like my favorite song said, “. . . I don't regret. What I did for Love . . .,” my life would be meaningless unless I risked everything to shine in the universe. “Do you have your travelers checks?” I patted my bag. “Address book?” Patted it again. “Do you have—” “Mom, please. I'm not a baby any longer.” “Don't ever say that to me again.” I'd hurt her, not intending so, her pride, matriarchy, and stalwart. She'd raised me well, sacrificed to the hilt. I owed her everything. “You will always be my baby.” “Hey, what about me?” “You're a pain,” I told my little sister. We exchanged our usual all-knowing sneer. I bet she was already plotting to move into my larger bedroom. So help me, if she kicked me before I got on the bus— “All aboard!” “Okay, I gotta go.” With speed to catch a moving train, I tossed my duffel into the bus's gaping belly compartment, hugged my mom the tightest ever, kissed both her cheeks as the tears poured for us both, our embrace refusing to let go but must, and like a vampire leaned to smooch my little sister's neck. She made a blocking cross with her forearms; “Ewww.” I darted for the driver collecting ticket stubs and jumped onto the first step, sending a wave and smile back at my family. Mom also waved big as she squeezed her newest little one up under her loving arm, my old place, Vera rubbing a sleeve under her eyes same as me. I'd miss her too. There awaited a long journey before me, twenty-two hours to be exact. I settled into a leathery midsection seat beside a dark tented window. I'd traveled by bus enough to knew not to sit too close to the narrow aft bathroom but to instead defend my sensitive deviated septum from under an air conditioning vent. The sparse passengers were evenly disbursed for privacy or protection; a little old lady at the window to my far left, a mother with a sleeping toddler in a portable car seat, a few quiet businessmen rummaging through briefcases, one elderly farmer wearing a straw hat, numerous couples waving at loved ones far below their windows. My family beckoned from the curb, my sister's face now buried in my mother's breasts. I promised to call at the first rest stop. The bus engine rumbled alive and the heavy lumbering behemoth made its way out of Ellijay, through the tree-lined back roads bursting with green, and toward the interstate. This would be my last chance to enjoy the South in spring. Sherbert-orange tulips, butter-yellow daffodils, and pink azaleas ringed the tiny cottages nestled amongst Weeping Willows and regal pines. Same as in our neighborhood, kids were out riding bikes or playing touch football, while brothers with water hoses teased little sisters. The evenings and mornings were cool, while the days warmed under sunny robin's egg blue skies. Breezes fluttered freshly laundered white sheets hung on clothes lines and offered some cover for the bumblebees harassing one another. Pollen dusted cars and back porches awaited their turn at cleansing, while lawn mowers were dragged across pampered landscapes and filled the air with the intoxicating bouquet of chlorophyll, my favorite scent. There would narrowly be any of those in New York, the concrete jungle. But I was not going there for the weather or the yard work. Even now as I rested my head against the high seat back, delightful melodies swirling within my head sent invigorating urges to my legs, right knee bounced maddeningly, wouldn't calm it down for the moon—Dance ten looks three; I can do that; At the ballet; Tits and ass; How many boys does he need? I knew all the Chorus Line lyrics, every dance routine, every twirl and prance, all the movie dialogue. Hamlisch and Kleban were geniuses. Over the years I'd spent hours in front of the DVD player parroting their dramatic compositions. Vera, of course, threw crayons at me in vain attempts to throw me off, but I contributed her constant torment to my ability to survive on stage. I always remained in character. That, an excellent memory, and a well-honed talent landed me lead roles in all my high school musicals, which, as a fringe benefit, kept me from being murdered. It might be fashionable to be gay in today's society, but tucked away inside this small town there existed reality. Rural teen boys were ruthless toward me. Though I never declared I was gay, no bullhorn and soapbox announcement, it was assumed because of my dancing artistry. I wasn't nelly or swishy or limp wristed, nor did I speak with a lisp or acted like a stereotypical effeminate queer. I also never ogled over the cute boys I'd pass in the halls, kept it to myself to be respectful. Actually, I was quite masculine: six foot one, lean athletic physique, narrow hips, great butt dimples, wide shoulders, blond hair and blue eyes, so clean-cut it was nauseating. I didn't even shave yet, and I kept my bangs long so they could be whipped during twirls. The girls loved me. They escorted me from classrooms, saved me seats in the cafeteria, and shared makeup tips, for the stage, of course. And, no, I'd never worn a dress nor desired to even try. To me I was just a plain old boy with a specialized talent, dancing. The rednecks didn't see it that way. They leered and hated me, disgusted at the very sight of me. Here comes twinkle-toes. They were the stereotypical ones; teeth missing, bad mullets, trailer trash who drove rusted pickup trucks displaying the Confederate flag, probably still ate clay. They all thought I wanted them, even the unwashed ones, while all the girls believed they could turn me. Fat chance with both. But now and then, a yokel brandished a knife, flipped it while leaning alone against an outside brick wall or followed me to the entrance of my neighborhood. I'd often heard that those who objected the most were closeted themselves. I was never actually attacked, perhaps spared due to my celebrity-ship, too visible a target. But they taught me to be vigilant. Once when fifteen and meeting Vera's school bus, I spotted an older boy about age ten, missing a tooth by the way, hassling Vera age nine. He knocked her books to the dusty ground and brandished his fist. Boy my blood boiled. I stormed right up that punk, grabbed a fist full of t-shirt, and shoved my other fist into his ugly, roadkill, soon-to-be-mug-shot puss. “Do that again, or to any other little girl, and you'll be eating this.” Vera said later that worthless boy disappeared from school by week's end. The incident was also one of the many times I'd comforted Vera under my soothing arm, such as the time her father never came home. See, Vera and I had different biological males; they were never dads. My mother, bless her, always picked poorly, not that there were a lot of choices in our small town. I suspected she fell too fast and too hard in an attempt to support her family. My father left us when I was five years old and Vera's at age three. The cowards. My mom had met both men at her veneer processing employer where she'd since high school shuffled invoices. She must have been lonely, me always at school or rehearsing a role, Vera a handful. Both men walked out on us, bad mullets and all. Fortunately, there was never any violence with them, just a lot of parental arguing and my mother's pleas for her better halves to stay. But there was a third suitor. During my junior high school year, me at age seventeen, my mom met a trucker at work. He seemed like a reasonable chap, took our mom to dinners, movies, and the Forth of July parade, even gifted Vera and myself store-bought chocolate gift baskets, our mom yellow mums. It was a ruse. He steadily became more controlling, talked his way into living with us, continued to carouse with his old floozies. One night my mom had enough. She kicked him out but he refused to leave, too drunk. He hit her and I saw it. Stupid or brave I stood up to him, and he knocked me to the kitchen floor, which sent Vera into her defensive mode. We were all on the man, Vera kicking his legs, me punching wildly and barely hitting the target, his hand around my throat, mom pleading with the man to leave her kids alone. Our neighbor intervened and headlocked the guy until the cops arrived. Never saw the bastard again. But through it all, my mother made sure that Vera and I knew she loved us and vowed she'd never to do what our fathers did.
Think Dame Edna
Drama Queen
Crime/Thriller - Words 72,000
Copyright © 2021 C. J. Atticus
A female impersonator and his estranged son are sequestered together after twenty-two years of seperation.
Nathan Davis, Atlanta’s infamous female impersonator, witnesses the murder of a dance club owner and the killer is after this only witness. For protection, Nathan is assigned a police guard--his only son. Officer Daniel is still ashamed about his father's profession. After twenty-two years of separation, concealed feelings of resentment and disgust boil up between them as they tolerate a snail-paced investigation. But who is the assassin out to silence Nathan?
When a bomb laden drone explodes outside Nathan and Daniel’s eighth floor hotel window, they are forced to lead their own police work, not knowing just how close their would-be assassin hides. During an exchange of hostages, they are shocked to discover their suspect is not at all whom they alleged. He’s been hiding right under their noses.
When a bomb laden drone explodes outside Nathan and Daniel’s eighth floor hotel window, they are forced to lead their own police work, not knowing just how close their would-be assassin hides. During an exchange of hostages, they are shocked to discover their suspect is not at all whom they alleged. He’s been hiding right under their noses.
On the Evening StageChapter 1
My son was trying to kill me. The police claimed he fired the bullet a week ago that shattered the window of my ’62 Lincoln Continental while I was opening the door. They also said he two days ago veered the white car onto the sidewalk in an attempt to run me down, while I strolled into Nordstrom! But he ran away from home twenty-two years ago. So was I to believe my son had returned to seek revenge for whatever else that had wronged him? I could understand if it were true, though. Daniel Preston had always been ashamed of having a female impersonator for a father. I was born Joshua Nathanial Preston, but I was now known as the Great Nathan Davis, the South’s infamous silver screen star impressionist and owner of Maxine’s, the most prestigious stage show and disco. My public titled me Davis because of how well I portrayed Miss Davis. I could imitate them all―Hepburn, Dietrich, Crawford, Garbo, and, of course, Bette. She was the easiest. Slap on a stringy red wig, slash a lit cigarette through the air, repeat “Dah-ling” while slinging attitude, and voila! I just never had the hips for it. I was big boned and low slung. “Heavy onion,” those on the street called it. When wearing pumps I walked like Yogi Bear tiptoeing along a cliff edge, but the schtick made my act more popular. I might be at retirement with a bit of snow on my liver-spotted roof and I could use a nip and tuck on my fat jowls, but I was still one helluva entertainer. Atlanta loved me. My son should have as well. Years ago he quit high school, packed a bag, and walked out without so much as a note. Everyday when passing his bedroom, I could still see the ghost of his red finger-painted “Do Not Enter” sign screaming with an adolescent’s anger. I also suffered the twinges of stage fright. I could perform before a crowd of ten thousand but never could I face my own son. My deepest sorrow continued to be never knowing what happened to him. Back then, a few of my patrons claimed they spotted Daniel working construction, holding a road sign or some such menial thing. After he turned eighteen, a legal notice arrived saying he had been inducted into the army, and over the years I’d made numerous calls to Fort Benning to keep up with his progress. Later, after I heard of his honorable discharge, the chain of connection snapped clean. No doubt he went on to seek another manly career. Guess he needed to keep proving himself. Inspector Covetti called thirty minutes ago to say he would arrive with the evidence of his absurd conclusion. Instead, he sent Skippy, this plainclothes deputy standing inside my front door. “Sir, did you understand anything I said after arriving?” asked this prepubescent, police prodigy. He looked twelve years old with long legs, bony shoulders, and porcelain smooth cheeks, a pure twinkie, would drive even the most entrenched chicken hawk in this town to beat themselves with a baseball bat. He had naive blue eyes and a pimple on his narrow chin. And that bowl-shaped haircut with gelled black bangs swooping above the right eye and matted to his temple? Probably just discovered the Beatles. Obviously, he was too square to be a member of the sorority and too unworldly to understand the significance of owning track lighting. Plus he wore the most god-awful brown penny loafers. They resembled shit-stompers from the age of bell bottoms and mini skirts, atrocious in any decade. And he was an underling! Before this kid showed up I was unpacking the newly delivered gift basket sitting on my foyer table. The caviar had captured my eye, and I had hoped to enjoy the gourmet treat with crème fraiche on buttered toast points with poached eggs while I ate in the library and listened to Mancini’s sultry pianissimos. No quiet comfortable breakfast for me this morning thanks to this pipsqueak’s interruption. And on top of that, this caviar was trout instead of imported sturgeon roe. Egad! “Mister Davis, if you’ll please listen to me.” “Young man, is this not the height of rudeness? Didn’t they know who I am? If Good Morning America expects to earn my contract signature by sending this ode to bad etiquette, then they have their heads up their butts. Lord, free me from my pain.” “Sir?” “Phew, this is nasty.” I resealed the cap on the miserly one ounce jar, which should have signaled something was amiss, and stuffed the atrocity back through the clear blue cellophane. I scooped up what remained of this grocery store rubbish, along with its cheap retail silver bow, and headed straight for the kitchen, of course, holding the stink bomb at arm’s length. “Sir, wait just a minute.” “Do you see that?” I asked, whipping my hips around the table. “Even the eyes in my copy of Thomas Gainsborough’s ‘Blue Boy’ are tearing.” I lived in an aged Victorian home with a long central hallway decorated with red Persian rugs, cherry hardwood floors, and walls lined with my private art gallery once featured in Architectural Digest. Later I’d apologize to every oil-painted character who turned up its nose to the putrid odor of rotting fish eggs following me like a fart. “Sir!” “Oh, tag along, boy.” I glanced over my shoulder toward the annoying recruit struggling to stay in tow. “We’ll talk on the way to the trash bin. I have to spare my maid respiratory failure.” “But my supervisor insists―” “And young fellow, never wear three patterns. Coat, tie, and shirt in solids are fine, but never three patterns. Wear at least one solid. Otherwise you look incompetent. Who are you, anyway?” “Deputy Maloy,” I heard, along with his clippie-clop shoes that echoed throughout my lovely gallery. “From the APD, I suppose. Have a first name?” “Joe.” “Too unvarnished. How about Joey? You look like a Joey to me. Why are you here?” “I’m here to take you into custody,” he answered. “I have a warrant.” “Let me see it.” While continuing to sail through my house I reached behind and gripped the paper shoved into my hand, pulled it into view, and studied the text. “I’m to be sequestered?” I tossed the annoying document up over my head, heard it caught from behind. “No, no, I’m too busy pulling a show back together after the fire and can’t be bothered with this right now.” “This is not a negotiation, sir.” “By the way, young man, I was never married to Bette Davis. I only impersonate her. Don’t you know who I am?” “Not exactly, sir.” “Pop idol virgin. Come on, keep up. And pick up your feet as we enter the kitchen. I don’t want my new white marble scuffed by those shoes. Are they even leather?” “Standard APD issue, sir.” “At least they’re a solid color. How old are you, boy?” “Twenty-five.” “Chicken from the coop.” Sweeping through the kitchen then pushing open the back screen door I welcomed the fresh breath of humid July air, though I hated having to pollute my newly renovated backyard with this military grade malodorant. I stopped mid-stride, and little Joey crashed into my back. “Sorry, sir,” he said, blushing and stepping to my side, the breeze not disturbing his quaff. “If you are bent on arresting someone, little fellow, try my neighbor. See along the hedge line, the top of that ladder hidden beyond the foliage?” Too many times I’d spotted the media savvy pervert perched atop that ladder with his zoom lens aimed at my kitchen window. So I had installed bamboo and Japanese ferns around my sandstone patio to cut off the prying eyes of my new nosy neighbor. “Simon “The Throat Slasher” Matheson,” I said to my little buddy. “The freelance author who torpedoes the famous moved in next door to write a tell-all book about my life and career. I oughta toss this nuclear waste into his yard but the stench would wilt my garden as well.” “Sir, we need to talk about this warrant.” “It’s rubbish, too.” I crossed the patio and dumped this former exquisite gift into the trash bin leaning against the house. “Sir, my operation manager is waiting,” the young deputy said. “Listen, I’m scheduled to fly to New York in three days. And I need to inform my wife.” “Wife?” “Don’t be impertinent, young man. A straight man can so do drag. It’s still acting, especially if one does it well, which I do.” “Please, sir, we need to go. Now.” “Me without an overnight bag? I can’t go out in public wearing this red smoking jacket and tucked silk scarf. That would be gauche. And corduroys don’t hold up well without a steam iron.” “Your necessities will be provided, and I have orders.” “Whose orders?” “My lieutenant will explain everything.” This young storm trooper turned out to be quite brawny underneath all those loose fitting stripes. He grabbed my arm and tugged me along the sidewalk. What was I to him, street trash? “Don’t be so rough. I know how to walk.” He hauled me around the house to his unmarked blue sedan in the driveway, where he released me, opened the front passenger door, then walked around the car, leaving me bewildered. Clearly this was no arrest. Protecting me seemed the arrangement, which I could appreciate. Maybe after pleading my case to his superior, assuredly he’d allow me to travel. Never disappoint an audience had always been my primary goal. Soon we were flowing with the congested downtown traffic, negotiating one-way streets, swerving around construction barriers, and running a few traffic signals. “Where are you taking me?” I demanded of my chauffeur who only focused on the traffic. “Do your orders permit conversation? Hello!” The gold Georgia Capital dome loomed in the skyline and it became clear we were not headed toward the nearby Police Department where a number of times I’d bailed out a few of my girls arrested for bad attitudes. Tallulah Gumhead and Jane Fondant were always in need. Mark my words someone would pay for inconveniencing me. I knew the governor. “Sir, please reach into the back seat and put on that hooded jacket.” “I’m to wear a disguise now?” Glancing into the back, I reached for the crumpled black garment, pulled it into my lap, and studied the most degrading thing I’d ever seen. “What is this, terrycloth? I only wear silk.” “Sir, please.” “Intolerable. This whole damn thing!” As I slid my arms into the miserable sleeves, I noticed we turned down Peachtree Street. Up ahead, the Westin Plaza Hotel appeared, the modern 73-story cylindrical spire featured prominently in my son’s bedroom mural. It was also the backdrop for the movie Sharky's Machine starring my old buddy Burt Reynolds. I used to dine at his Underground Atlanta restaurant in the 70s. Ah, the good ol’ days. We rolled along a back alley and parked next to a delivery track backed up to the hotel freight dock. “I can’t even use the lobby entrance?” “Follow me,” the young officer said, grabbing the car keys. “And pull up the hoodie.” “Now that’s the last bobby pen.” “Sir, please, we both have our orders.” “Orders-smorders.” But I cooperated, and with all dispatch he led me through the backdoor, down a cinderblock corridor, past a guard who waved us through, then into the hot, steamy kitchen. At a back service elevator, we rode to the eighth floor where he rushed me down the bare concrete hall and into a room. Finally given a chance to relax, I was stunned at the surroundings stuck in mid-remodel. “No phone, no TV, and no bar!” “I’ll check in across the hall.” He closed the door. “Wait?” I tried the door handle and found it locked from the outside. “Hey.” The next few frustrating minutes seemed like an hour as I surveyed the most depressing hotel suite I’d ever seen. It had a kitchenette, yes, but it lacked appliances, and the living room floor had also been striped down to bare cement. Where was the goddamn furniture? There had better be a king size bed somewhere. Just at the point of my oncoming screaming fit, my jailer returned with his supervisor. “Now this is more like it,” I said, relieved this debacle neared an end. “Let’s get some answers.” The young deputy sidestepped and allowed the boss to enter. This strapping man exuded dominance, about age forty with brunette hair, wide shoulders, and an air of superiority, which seemed as fitting as his ensemble―creased black slacks, starched white dress shirt, and striped red tie. At least this man knew fashion, though he wore a leather shoulder harness with revolver. He stopped just inside the closing door, crossed his arms, and sneered. What the hell did I do to make him hate me? It took a moment to realize the identity of my warden. “Mister Davis,” Maloy said. “This is the operation manager and the man who issues all the orders. Lieutenant Dan Preston.”
My son was trying to kill me. The police claimed he fired the bullet a week ago that shattered the window of my ’62 Lincoln Continental while I was opening the door. They also said he two days ago veered the white car onto the sidewalk in an attempt to run me down, while I strolled into Nordstrom! But he ran away from home twenty-two years ago. So was I to believe my son had returned to seek revenge for whatever else that had wronged him? I could understand if it were true, though. Daniel Preston had always been ashamed of having a female impersonator for a father. I was born Joshua Nathanial Preston, but I was now known as the Great Nathan Davis, the South’s infamous silver screen star impressionist and owner of Maxine’s, the most prestigious stage show and disco. My public titled me Davis because of how well I portrayed Miss Davis. I could imitate them all―Hepburn, Dietrich, Crawford, Garbo, and, of course, Bette. She was the easiest. Slap on a stringy red wig, slash a lit cigarette through the air, repeat “Dah-ling” while slinging attitude, and voila! I just never had the hips for it. I was big boned and low slung. “Heavy onion,” those on the street called it. When wearing pumps I walked like Yogi Bear tiptoeing along a cliff edge, but the schtick made my act more popular. I might be at retirement with a bit of snow on my liver-spotted roof and I could use a nip and tuck on my fat jowls, but I was still one helluva entertainer. Atlanta loved me. My son should have as well. Years ago he quit high school, packed a bag, and walked out without so much as a note. Everyday when passing his bedroom, I could still see the ghost of his red finger-painted “Do Not Enter” sign screaming with an adolescent’s anger. I also suffered the twinges of stage fright. I could perform before a crowd of ten thousand but never could I face my own son. My deepest sorrow continued to be never knowing what happened to him. Back then, a few of my patrons claimed they spotted Daniel working construction, holding a road sign or some such menial thing. After he turned eighteen, a legal notice arrived saying he had been inducted into the army, and over the years I’d made numerous calls to Fort Benning to keep up with his progress. Later, after I heard of his honorable discharge, the chain of connection snapped clean. No doubt he went on to seek another manly career. Guess he needed to keep proving himself. Inspector Covetti called thirty minutes ago to say he would arrive with the evidence of his absurd conclusion. Instead, he sent Skippy, this plainclothes deputy standing inside my front door. “Sir, did you understand anything I said after arriving?” asked this prepubescent, police prodigy. He looked twelve years old with long legs, bony shoulders, and porcelain smooth cheeks, a pure twinkie, would drive even the most entrenched chicken hawk in this town to beat themselves with a baseball bat. He had naive blue eyes and a pimple on his narrow chin. And that bowl-shaped haircut with gelled black bangs swooping above the right eye and matted to his temple? Probably just discovered the Beatles. Obviously, he was too square to be a member of the sorority and too unworldly to understand the significance of owning track lighting. Plus he wore the most god-awful brown penny loafers. They resembled shit-stompers from the age of bell bottoms and mini skirts, atrocious in any decade. And he was an underling! Before this kid showed up I was unpacking the newly delivered gift basket sitting on my foyer table. The caviar had captured my eye, and I had hoped to enjoy the gourmet treat with crème fraiche on buttered toast points with poached eggs while I ate in the library and listened to Mancini’s sultry pianissimos. No quiet comfortable breakfast for me this morning thanks to this pipsqueak’s interruption. And on top of that, this caviar was trout instead of imported sturgeon roe. Egad! “Mister Davis, if you’ll please listen to me.” “Young man, is this not the height of rudeness? Didn’t they know who I am? If Good Morning America expects to earn my contract signature by sending this ode to bad etiquette, then they have their heads up their butts. Lord, free me from my pain.” “Sir?” “Phew, this is nasty.” I resealed the cap on the miserly one ounce jar, which should have signaled something was amiss, and stuffed the atrocity back through the clear blue cellophane. I scooped up what remained of this grocery store rubbish, along with its cheap retail silver bow, and headed straight for the kitchen, of course, holding the stink bomb at arm’s length. “Sir, wait just a minute.” “Do you see that?” I asked, whipping my hips around the table. “Even the eyes in my copy of Thomas Gainsborough’s ‘Blue Boy’ are tearing.” I lived in an aged Victorian home with a long central hallway decorated with red Persian rugs, cherry hardwood floors, and walls lined with my private art gallery once featured in Architectural Digest. Later I’d apologize to every oil-painted character who turned up its nose to the putrid odor of rotting fish eggs following me like a fart. “Sir!” “Oh, tag along, boy.” I glanced over my shoulder toward the annoying recruit struggling to stay in tow. “We’ll talk on the way to the trash bin. I have to spare my maid respiratory failure.” “But my supervisor insists―” “And young fellow, never wear three patterns. Coat, tie, and shirt in solids are fine, but never three patterns. Wear at least one solid. Otherwise you look incompetent. Who are you, anyway?” “Deputy Maloy,” I heard, along with his clippie-clop shoes that echoed throughout my lovely gallery. “From the APD, I suppose. Have a first name?” “Joe.” “Too unvarnished. How about Joey? You look like a Joey to me. Why are you here?” “I’m here to take you into custody,” he answered. “I have a warrant.” “Let me see it.” While continuing to sail through my house I reached behind and gripped the paper shoved into my hand, pulled it into view, and studied the text. “I’m to be sequestered?” I tossed the annoying document up over my head, heard it caught from behind. “No, no, I’m too busy pulling a show back together after the fire and can’t be bothered with this right now.” “This is not a negotiation, sir.” “By the way, young man, I was never married to Bette Davis. I only impersonate her. Don’t you know who I am?” “Not exactly, sir.” “Pop idol virgin. Come on, keep up. And pick up your feet as we enter the kitchen. I don’t want my new white marble scuffed by those shoes. Are they even leather?” “Standard APD issue, sir.” “At least they’re a solid color. How old are you, boy?” “Twenty-five.” “Chicken from the coop.” Sweeping through the kitchen then pushing open the back screen door I welcomed the fresh breath of humid July air, though I hated having to pollute my newly renovated backyard with this military grade malodorant. I stopped mid-stride, and little Joey crashed into my back. “Sorry, sir,” he said, blushing and stepping to my side, the breeze not disturbing his quaff. “If you are bent on arresting someone, little fellow, try my neighbor. See along the hedge line, the top of that ladder hidden beyond the foliage?” Too many times I’d spotted the media savvy pervert perched atop that ladder with his zoom lens aimed at my kitchen window. So I had installed bamboo and Japanese ferns around my sandstone patio to cut off the prying eyes of my new nosy neighbor. “Simon “The Throat Slasher” Matheson,” I said to my little buddy. “The freelance author who torpedoes the famous moved in next door to write a tell-all book about my life and career. I oughta toss this nuclear waste into his yard but the stench would wilt my garden as well.” “Sir, we need to talk about this warrant.” “It’s rubbish, too.” I crossed the patio and dumped this former exquisite gift into the trash bin leaning against the house. “Sir, my operation manager is waiting,” the young deputy said. “Listen, I’m scheduled to fly to New York in three days. And I need to inform my wife.” “Wife?” “Don’t be impertinent, young man. A straight man can so do drag. It’s still acting, especially if one does it well, which I do.” “Please, sir, we need to go. Now.” “Me without an overnight bag? I can’t go out in public wearing this red smoking jacket and tucked silk scarf. That would be gauche. And corduroys don’t hold up well without a steam iron.” “Your necessities will be provided, and I have orders.” “Whose orders?” “My lieutenant will explain everything.” This young storm trooper turned out to be quite brawny underneath all those loose fitting stripes. He grabbed my arm and tugged me along the sidewalk. What was I to him, street trash? “Don’t be so rough. I know how to walk.” He hauled me around the house to his unmarked blue sedan in the driveway, where he released me, opened the front passenger door, then walked around the car, leaving me bewildered. Clearly this was no arrest. Protecting me seemed the arrangement, which I could appreciate. Maybe after pleading my case to his superior, assuredly he’d allow me to travel. Never disappoint an audience had always been my primary goal. Soon we were flowing with the congested downtown traffic, negotiating one-way streets, swerving around construction barriers, and running a few traffic signals. “Where are you taking me?” I demanded of my chauffeur who only focused on the traffic. “Do your orders permit conversation? Hello!” The gold Georgia Capital dome loomed in the skyline and it became clear we were not headed toward the nearby Police Department where a number of times I’d bailed out a few of my girls arrested for bad attitudes. Tallulah Gumhead and Jane Fondant were always in need. Mark my words someone would pay for inconveniencing me. I knew the governor. “Sir, please reach into the back seat and put on that hooded jacket.” “I’m to wear a disguise now?” Glancing into the back, I reached for the crumpled black garment, pulled it into my lap, and studied the most degrading thing I’d ever seen. “What is this, terrycloth? I only wear silk.” “Sir, please.” “Intolerable. This whole damn thing!” As I slid my arms into the miserable sleeves, I noticed we turned down Peachtree Street. Up ahead, the Westin Plaza Hotel appeared, the modern 73-story cylindrical spire featured prominently in my son’s bedroom mural. It was also the backdrop for the movie Sharky's Machine starring my old buddy Burt Reynolds. I used to dine at his Underground Atlanta restaurant in the 70s. Ah, the good ol’ days. We rolled along a back alley and parked next to a delivery track backed up to the hotel freight dock. “I can’t even use the lobby entrance?” “Follow me,” the young officer said, grabbing the car keys. “And pull up the hoodie.” “Now that’s the last bobby pen.” “Sir, please, we both have our orders.” “Orders-smorders.” But I cooperated, and with all dispatch he led me through the backdoor, down a cinderblock corridor, past a guard who waved us through, then into the hot, steamy kitchen. At a back service elevator, we rode to the eighth floor where he rushed me down the bare concrete hall and into a room. Finally given a chance to relax, I was stunned at the surroundings stuck in mid-remodel. “No phone, no TV, and no bar!” “I’ll check in across the hall.” He closed the door. “Wait?” I tried the door handle and found it locked from the outside. “Hey.” The next few frustrating minutes seemed like an hour as I surveyed the most depressing hotel suite I’d ever seen. It had a kitchenette, yes, but it lacked appliances, and the living room floor had also been striped down to bare cement. Where was the goddamn furniture? There had better be a king size bed somewhere. Just at the point of my oncoming screaming fit, my jailer returned with his supervisor. “Now this is more like it,” I said, relieved this debacle neared an end. “Let’s get some answers.” The young deputy sidestepped and allowed the boss to enter. This strapping man exuded dominance, about age forty with brunette hair, wide shoulders, and an air of superiority, which seemed as fitting as his ensemble―creased black slacks, starched white dress shirt, and striped red tie. At least this man knew fashion, though he wore a leather shoulder harness with revolver. He stopped just inside the closing door, crossed his arms, and sneered. What the hell did I do to make him hate me? It took a moment to realize the identity of my warden. “Mister Davis,” Maloy said. “This is the operation manager and the man who issues all the orders. Lieutenant Dan Preston.”
Ward of Charleston County
Women's Fiction
Words 69,000
Copyright © 2021 C. J. Atticus
Abigail Darthea Shaw, a rowdy eighty-two-year-old, struggles with the truth about herself as she works to reunite her family.
Abigail Darthea Shaw lives an idyllic life. She’s the toast of Charleston nightlife and still a board member of the company she founded. But she also has a dysfunctional family. When her attorney’s letter indicates her oldest son has petitioned the court to declare her incompetent, she does what any staunchly independent would do. She fights back.
But her resistance sends her on an introspective journey she didn’t anticipate. Her grandkids, not seen in fifteen years, are a bunch of eccentric nutcases. Publicity could also expose the past she’s kept between herself and best friend in a nursing home. When she learns the horrific secret her three now-adult children have themselves kept, her youngest son attempting suicide because of it, her invincible persona collapses. Is she really responsible for her devastated family? The Charleston Probate Court might decide for her.
But her resistance sends her on an introspective journey she didn’t anticipate. Her grandkids, not seen in fifteen years, are a bunch of eccentric nutcases. Publicity could also expose the past she’s kept between herself and best friend in a nursing home. When she learns the horrific secret her three now-adult children have themselves kept, her youngest son attempting suicide because of it, her invincible persona collapses. Is she really responsible for her devastated family? The Charleston Probate Court might decide for her.
Ward of Charleston CountyChapter 1
Me incompetent? Preposterous. Me? Abigail Darthea Shaw, age eighty-two, one of the least spiderly ladies about town? Why, I was the mother of three, grandmother of four, widow of a philandering slime-dog who’d been about as useful in our marriage as shriveled pig testicles, and the current inestimable Dame of Charleston, South Carolina. So what if I was violently opinionated? I was still a woman, sometimes sweet, most times sour, always emotional. I had all my marbles. I could even name all forty-five Presidents of the United States and tell you what year it was. Like I said, preposterous. Listen to the letter that got my dander up. Dear Miss Abbey. With regret, I must inform you that a matter has been brought to my attention that involves you. Normally, I would write to your office. But maintaining confidentially was paramount, and I felt you would appreciate not exposing this matter to the public. A docket has been filed with the clerk of the Charleston County Municipal Court Division seeking to have you declared incompetent. Please contact me at your earliest convenience so that we may meet and strategize our defense, possibly make you a ward of the court. The name of the petitioner is Benjamin Hollister Shaw, Jr. With regards, Sidney Allen Ratzenberger, Attorney at Law. My own damn son was suing me? What did I ever do to him? Raise him one can short of a six pack? See to it his elevator didn’t get out of the basement? Scold him for only getting a B+ on his blood test? Yes, yes, I’d admit these were terrible things to think of one’s own son. But dammit, when the hell did he go wrong? I’d been having a relatively decent morning until I discovered this pathetic letter stuffed into my carryon bag. I sat onboard a flight bound for New York. Earlier I’d dashed out my home to meet the late-arriving cab to the airport and grabbed the mail along the way, expecting to find my complimentary annual tickets to the spring Spoleto Festival. There was so much mail I brought it aboard the plane. Now I was trapped at thirty thousand feet and unable to do anything about this. I preferred bad news given directly to my face, no pussyfooting around, and not stuffed into a damn letter. Evidently my attorney didn’t remember this or he was afraid to face me. I’d call and give him a deserved piece of my mind but my cell phone was dead. During my earlier rush to the airport, I hadn’t noticed the battery needed recharging. From my front row window seat I glanced about first-class while pressing the Call button. This was one time a traveling companion in the next seat would be helpful, even the fat ass last week whose flab rolled over the armrest. “Stewardess, stewardess? Little lady!” There was supposed to be prompt service in first class. Who flew me? Plunging Airlines? Finally the same attentive young woman who served me this nasty wine appeared around the forward bulkhead and leaned her perky breasts toward me. I mean really. How dare she point those guns in my direction. I had them too—sixty years ago. “Yes, Miss Shaw, may I help you?” She de-pressed the Call button. “My dear, this wine tastes like pee.” I shoved the glass into her personal space. “I’m sorry, ma’am,” she said, taking the glass away from her face. “May I bring you a Martini?” “You didn’t stomp the grapes, Dearie. Just bring me a bottled water. And how long before we land at LaGuardia?” “Two hours, ma’am.” “Do you have a phone I may use?” “No, ma’am, I’m sorry.” She had better be sorry. And there was another thing, her version of the “look,” the obvious but minuscule revulsion on her face that she tried to conceal while turning away. I couldn’t help being old and set in my ways. But I vowed long ago never to become one of those blue-haired, pasty faced ladies who globbed on eyeliner and lipstick like a drunken art student squeezing acrylic paint onto canvas. Subtle makeup techniques suited me, a brush of cheek powder and a dab of plum lip balm. I looked damn good for a broad my age—sneer and you’d get my high heel dug into your foot. I’d admit to coloring my gray hair with a touch of brick-red. I also deserved courtesy and respect having earned it after all my years. But I’d give this stewardess and her airline credit for trying to satisfy me. I wasn’t a complete “bee-otch,” you know. I considered asking the other passengers about borrowing one of their phones, though it was against regulations, which didn’t mean me, of course. But strangely, everyone appeared to be asleep. “Cowards,” I yelled at them. I could only slump in my seat and reread this damn letter. For most people, hearing from a legal firm was like contact from the IRS. Panic City, right? Absolute terror would engulf you, and you’d want to hide under the covers to avoid dealing with them. Their legalese would have you convicted before the first interview and you’d lose your money, your reputation, maybe your freedom. I’d spent decades dealing with lawyers. I’d rather swallow a live spider or use rusty pliers and rip my manicured nails from their quicks than deal with mine. He also had “rat” in his name. Sidney Allen Ratzenberger was the quintessential attorney rat, still practicing at eighty-one years old and a boil on my wrinkled tuchus. Old Sid had spent years slumped down in his high-back leather chair, toes barely touching the carpet, a legal book poised on his belly. His skewed right shirt collar always pointed outward. He wore square wire-rimmed glasses which he’d peer through as he looked down on everyone. He had black, coldhearted but cerebral eyes half hidden under squiggly white eyebrows. Fine prickly white hair ran around his bald head from liver-spotted pink ear to liver-spotted pink ear—rat ears. He could easily pose for a pencil-drawn, deformed character on the cover of a children’s book filled with sinister nursery rhymes. Despite all this, he was one helluva lawyer. Over the years there had been countless times when he pulled me and my company out of hell’s clutches. Just what was needed when I wanted to sink my teeth into someone’s throat. And there’d be mutant Sid, before and after dabbing the preverbal hankie against his bloodied chops, and me walking out of court victorious. But this letter . . . Sid would face his most challenging case, one that even he might lose. Dear . . . Normally business correspondences addressed people with “Dear Sir” or “Madam,” “Mr. or Mrs. So-and-So,” “Greetings,” “Pursuant to,” or something like “To the Competent Attorney of Record” or, in my case, “Mrs. Freakin’ Former Company President.” But for an attorney, especially mine, to use the term Dear? Just pure comedy, disingenuousness at best. No, no, mustn’t get too personal, must maintain a professional distance. God forbid a lawyer got chummy. The Gates of Hell would crack open and the Devil himself would reach up through the steaming sulfurous gas and snatch their traitorous asses right off the face of the green Earth. Miss Abbey . . . And Sid used my casual given name, too, not my full name, Abigail Darthea Shaw. I had earned a proper salutation. I mean really. I’d been CEO of my company for the past sixty-one years and remained on the board of directors while holding the controlling stock interest. Only people close to me were permitted to use Abbey, my way of separating business from pleasure. I’d worked with Sidney for over fifty years and he had never called me Abbey, not until this damn letter. I’d always been Miss Shaw to him. He also never mailed anything to my home. Everything went to my downtown office—business correspondences, contracts, real estate deeds, and my will. With regret, I must inform you . . . The regret phrase. He didn’t bother to start with cordiality like “I hope all is well with you” or “Are you looking forward to the spring thaw?” Rats hid from all forms of weather. A matter has been brought to my attention that involves you . . . Now the meat of Sidney’s letter, right away too, no sugarcoating required. I was as familiar with Sid’s ways as the dangling skin under my arms. But despite his cutthroat reputation, he was the only non-ambulance chasing lawyer I’d ever known; he waited for desperation to come to him. Long ago in days when a personal matter of mine required special handling and confidentiality, masterful Gizmo aided and succeeded with me. To this day, no one had ever suspected that my daughter . . . I could rest assured Sid’s letter had nothing to do with my past. He knew exactly how to erase anyone’s paw prints in the sand, especially mine. Normally, I would write to your office. But maintaining confidentially was paramount, and I felt you would appreciate not exposing this matter to the public . . . Damn straight. I never cottoned to publicity. I’d turned down countless offers from publishers interested in telling my entrepreneurial story, which began long before women in seats of power became admirable. I preferred to concentrate on my goal of remaining a successful career woman who built a company to heights that most of my peers, and men for that matter, envied. I never apologized for being right nor had I ever compromised. I wanted what I wanted when I wanted it. Visionaries always did, and the direct approach suited me quite nicely, you know. Stab’em in the heart instead of administrating a slow poison. But I never considered myself cruel. Never had I browbeaten my employees, and I had never been the kind of wife who mercilessly berated her husband. I never compared him to another man or to a certain unrequited lover who even today no one had ever known about. Never had I acted sweet or baby-talked to get my way. I had earned what I possess through hard work, the best lesson inherited from my parents, though setting a good example never seemed to work on my kids who didn’t bother to mail me a birthday card or pick up the damn phone. This letter was evidence of that. In 1931 I was the only child born to Rupert and Alma Shaw in Goose Creek, South Carolina, an agricultural community north of Charleston where my parents owned a cluster of Christmas tree farms. Unconventional from the start, I grew up a tomboy. While my prim and proper peers wore Princess Elizabeth inspired skirts, I preferred an A-2 leather flight jacket, blue jeans, and hair cut and coiffed like the new boy styles. I had antisocial teen tinges as well: I snuck out at night to attend low country rhythm and blues clubs instead of school big band sock hops; I intended to join the air force so I could operate the B-17 tail gun and kill me some Japs, though I never got to; and I bantered about sex though I was secretly too timid to try it. My favorite actress was Katherine Hepburn because of her free-spirited ways, and I emulated her as much as possible. Later it was Maggie Smith, after I discovered her. I knew nothing about politics and didn’t pay attention until my ultimate transformation in 1951 just after my twentieth birthday. I inherited the family business after my parents died in a freak traffic accident. On that fateful day, while following a logging truck piled high with holiday cuttings, they drove around the trailer to take the route lead when the load shifted. I was left with little time to mourn or learn the family business that came under immediate attack from my all-male and envious competitors. In those times, women weren’t exactly regarded as executive material. I had to expand my already gruff personality if I was to be taken serious and win every legal challenge, which I began doing after hiring Ratzenberger. Failure was never an option. Having grown up around many tree fellers, the hardworking loggers with an equal brusqueness to mine, their loyal support and tutelage helped lay the foundation for what I was to become―a respected, international leader who ran a Wall Street favored conglomerate that cultivated vast forests for the furniture and construction industries. But I wasn’t completely stoic. I still appreciated a delicate rose or the sultry melodies wafting from a jazz quartet, while banging my fists on a conference room table. And don’t bother to label me a feminist. I busted the glass ceiling long before the effort became popularized by Gloria Full-of-Bull Steinem in the 70s when she began all her yaah-yaahing. Despite the trend for gender superiority, I had worked with many men, and promoted them as well. I also egged on my latest nemesis—Death himself. Admittedly, while nothing frightened me, Death’s stalking did unnerve me. He would pop up at the oddest places, like outside my home at night. He’d stand under the glowing yellow streetlamp and aim his bloodied sickle at my front door. Sometimes I’d spot him in a mirror standing behind me. Other times he’d appear outside my office as a ghostly apparition hovering above the sidewalk, allowing unperceptive pedestrians to walk right through his dusty blackness. He was an annoying reminder of how I had fewer years ahead than behind, what we all faced. But Death knew not to take me before my time. He’d get his boney ass kicked back to wherever in oblivion from which he came. Even Mister Spookface knew not to mess with this old lady. I did, however, still have to contend with the most irritating people in the world—doctors. You see, I still smoked, and every physician told me time and time again to quit, and to cut the sodium from my meals, and to take my medication, and to inform them about every little hiccup or event, and to. . . Damn doctors. I wasn’t a hundred and eighty-two, you know. When I got to be that old, then I’d show concern. For now, this active woman remained an intrepid participant in my company’s business. Sid’s letter rolled on. A docket has been filed with the clerk of the Charleston County Municipal Court Division seeking to have you declared incompetent . . . There was that word again. Incompetent. Did I sound inept to you? Please contact me at your earliest convenience so that we may meet and strategize our defense, possibly make you a ward of the court . . . Damn my attorney for sending this letter and suggesting he make me a ward of Charleston County. Did he believe I’d allow someone else to make decisions on my behalf? I mean really. I ought to fire his tuchus when I got back home. For now, I was trapped in this goddamn airliner. I hated feeling helpless. The name of the petitioner is Benjamin Hollister Shaw, Jr . . . Yeah. I knew him. If my son thought I’d just roll over like a belly offering puppy, then he had no idea whom he was dealing with. I could promise him one thing. This old lady ain’t goin’ down without a fight.
Me incompetent? Preposterous. Me? Abigail Darthea Shaw, age eighty-two, one of the least spiderly ladies about town? Why, I was the mother of three, grandmother of four, widow of a philandering slime-dog who’d been about as useful in our marriage as shriveled pig testicles, and the current inestimable Dame of Charleston, South Carolina. So what if I was violently opinionated? I was still a woman, sometimes sweet, most times sour, always emotional. I had all my marbles. I could even name all forty-five Presidents of the United States and tell you what year it was. Like I said, preposterous. Listen to the letter that got my dander up. Dear Miss Abbey. With regret, I must inform you that a matter has been brought to my attention that involves you. Normally, I would write to your office. But maintaining confidentially was paramount, and I felt you would appreciate not exposing this matter to the public. A docket has been filed with the clerk of the Charleston County Municipal Court Division seeking to have you declared incompetent. Please contact me at your earliest convenience so that we may meet and strategize our defense, possibly make you a ward of the court. The name of the petitioner is Benjamin Hollister Shaw, Jr. With regards, Sidney Allen Ratzenberger, Attorney at Law. My own damn son was suing me? What did I ever do to him? Raise him one can short of a six pack? See to it his elevator didn’t get out of the basement? Scold him for only getting a B+ on his blood test? Yes, yes, I’d admit these were terrible things to think of one’s own son. But dammit, when the hell did he go wrong? I’d been having a relatively decent morning until I discovered this pathetic letter stuffed into my carryon bag. I sat onboard a flight bound for New York. Earlier I’d dashed out my home to meet the late-arriving cab to the airport and grabbed the mail along the way, expecting to find my complimentary annual tickets to the spring Spoleto Festival. There was so much mail I brought it aboard the plane. Now I was trapped at thirty thousand feet and unable to do anything about this. I preferred bad news given directly to my face, no pussyfooting around, and not stuffed into a damn letter. Evidently my attorney didn’t remember this or he was afraid to face me. I’d call and give him a deserved piece of my mind but my cell phone was dead. During my earlier rush to the airport, I hadn’t noticed the battery needed recharging. From my front row window seat I glanced about first-class while pressing the Call button. This was one time a traveling companion in the next seat would be helpful, even the fat ass last week whose flab rolled over the armrest. “Stewardess, stewardess? Little lady!” There was supposed to be prompt service in first class. Who flew me? Plunging Airlines? Finally the same attentive young woman who served me this nasty wine appeared around the forward bulkhead and leaned her perky breasts toward me. I mean really. How dare she point those guns in my direction. I had them too—sixty years ago. “Yes, Miss Shaw, may I help you?” She de-pressed the Call button. “My dear, this wine tastes like pee.” I shoved the glass into her personal space. “I’m sorry, ma’am,” she said, taking the glass away from her face. “May I bring you a Martini?” “You didn’t stomp the grapes, Dearie. Just bring me a bottled water. And how long before we land at LaGuardia?” “Two hours, ma’am.” “Do you have a phone I may use?” “No, ma’am, I’m sorry.” She had better be sorry. And there was another thing, her version of the “look,” the obvious but minuscule revulsion on her face that she tried to conceal while turning away. I couldn’t help being old and set in my ways. But I vowed long ago never to become one of those blue-haired, pasty faced ladies who globbed on eyeliner and lipstick like a drunken art student squeezing acrylic paint onto canvas. Subtle makeup techniques suited me, a brush of cheek powder and a dab of plum lip balm. I looked damn good for a broad my age—sneer and you’d get my high heel dug into your foot. I’d admit to coloring my gray hair with a touch of brick-red. I also deserved courtesy and respect having earned it after all my years. But I’d give this stewardess and her airline credit for trying to satisfy me. I wasn’t a complete “bee-otch,” you know. I considered asking the other passengers about borrowing one of their phones, though it was against regulations, which didn’t mean me, of course. But strangely, everyone appeared to be asleep. “Cowards,” I yelled at them. I could only slump in my seat and reread this damn letter. For most people, hearing from a legal firm was like contact from the IRS. Panic City, right? Absolute terror would engulf you, and you’d want to hide under the covers to avoid dealing with them. Their legalese would have you convicted before the first interview and you’d lose your money, your reputation, maybe your freedom. I’d spent decades dealing with lawyers. I’d rather swallow a live spider or use rusty pliers and rip my manicured nails from their quicks than deal with mine. He also had “rat” in his name. Sidney Allen Ratzenberger was the quintessential attorney rat, still practicing at eighty-one years old and a boil on my wrinkled tuchus. Old Sid had spent years slumped down in his high-back leather chair, toes barely touching the carpet, a legal book poised on his belly. His skewed right shirt collar always pointed outward. He wore square wire-rimmed glasses which he’d peer through as he looked down on everyone. He had black, coldhearted but cerebral eyes half hidden under squiggly white eyebrows. Fine prickly white hair ran around his bald head from liver-spotted pink ear to liver-spotted pink ear—rat ears. He could easily pose for a pencil-drawn, deformed character on the cover of a children’s book filled with sinister nursery rhymes. Despite all this, he was one helluva lawyer. Over the years there had been countless times when he pulled me and my company out of hell’s clutches. Just what was needed when I wanted to sink my teeth into someone’s throat. And there’d be mutant Sid, before and after dabbing the preverbal hankie against his bloodied chops, and me walking out of court victorious. But this letter . . . Sid would face his most challenging case, one that even he might lose. Dear . . . Normally business correspondences addressed people with “Dear Sir” or “Madam,” “Mr. or Mrs. So-and-So,” “Greetings,” “Pursuant to,” or something like “To the Competent Attorney of Record” or, in my case, “Mrs. Freakin’ Former Company President.” But for an attorney, especially mine, to use the term Dear? Just pure comedy, disingenuousness at best. No, no, mustn’t get too personal, must maintain a professional distance. God forbid a lawyer got chummy. The Gates of Hell would crack open and the Devil himself would reach up through the steaming sulfurous gas and snatch their traitorous asses right off the face of the green Earth. Miss Abbey . . . And Sid used my casual given name, too, not my full name, Abigail Darthea Shaw. I had earned a proper salutation. I mean really. I’d been CEO of my company for the past sixty-one years and remained on the board of directors while holding the controlling stock interest. Only people close to me were permitted to use Abbey, my way of separating business from pleasure. I’d worked with Sidney for over fifty years and he had never called me Abbey, not until this damn letter. I’d always been Miss Shaw to him. He also never mailed anything to my home. Everything went to my downtown office—business correspondences, contracts, real estate deeds, and my will. With regret, I must inform you . . . The regret phrase. He didn’t bother to start with cordiality like “I hope all is well with you” or “Are you looking forward to the spring thaw?” Rats hid from all forms of weather. A matter has been brought to my attention that involves you . . . Now the meat of Sidney’s letter, right away too, no sugarcoating required. I was as familiar with Sid’s ways as the dangling skin under my arms. But despite his cutthroat reputation, he was the only non-ambulance chasing lawyer I’d ever known; he waited for desperation to come to him. Long ago in days when a personal matter of mine required special handling and confidentiality, masterful Gizmo aided and succeeded with me. To this day, no one had ever suspected that my daughter . . . I could rest assured Sid’s letter had nothing to do with my past. He knew exactly how to erase anyone’s paw prints in the sand, especially mine. Normally, I would write to your office. But maintaining confidentially was paramount, and I felt you would appreciate not exposing this matter to the public . . . Damn straight. I never cottoned to publicity. I’d turned down countless offers from publishers interested in telling my entrepreneurial story, which began long before women in seats of power became admirable. I preferred to concentrate on my goal of remaining a successful career woman who built a company to heights that most of my peers, and men for that matter, envied. I never apologized for being right nor had I ever compromised. I wanted what I wanted when I wanted it. Visionaries always did, and the direct approach suited me quite nicely, you know. Stab’em in the heart instead of administrating a slow poison. But I never considered myself cruel. Never had I browbeaten my employees, and I had never been the kind of wife who mercilessly berated her husband. I never compared him to another man or to a certain unrequited lover who even today no one had ever known about. Never had I acted sweet or baby-talked to get my way. I had earned what I possess through hard work, the best lesson inherited from my parents, though setting a good example never seemed to work on my kids who didn’t bother to mail me a birthday card or pick up the damn phone. This letter was evidence of that. In 1931 I was the only child born to Rupert and Alma Shaw in Goose Creek, South Carolina, an agricultural community north of Charleston where my parents owned a cluster of Christmas tree farms. Unconventional from the start, I grew up a tomboy. While my prim and proper peers wore Princess Elizabeth inspired skirts, I preferred an A-2 leather flight jacket, blue jeans, and hair cut and coiffed like the new boy styles. I had antisocial teen tinges as well: I snuck out at night to attend low country rhythm and blues clubs instead of school big band sock hops; I intended to join the air force so I could operate the B-17 tail gun and kill me some Japs, though I never got to; and I bantered about sex though I was secretly too timid to try it. My favorite actress was Katherine Hepburn because of her free-spirited ways, and I emulated her as much as possible. Later it was Maggie Smith, after I discovered her. I knew nothing about politics and didn’t pay attention until my ultimate transformation in 1951 just after my twentieth birthday. I inherited the family business after my parents died in a freak traffic accident. On that fateful day, while following a logging truck piled high with holiday cuttings, they drove around the trailer to take the route lead when the load shifted. I was left with little time to mourn or learn the family business that came under immediate attack from my all-male and envious competitors. In those times, women weren’t exactly regarded as executive material. I had to expand my already gruff personality if I was to be taken serious and win every legal challenge, which I began doing after hiring Ratzenberger. Failure was never an option. Having grown up around many tree fellers, the hardworking loggers with an equal brusqueness to mine, their loyal support and tutelage helped lay the foundation for what I was to become―a respected, international leader who ran a Wall Street favored conglomerate that cultivated vast forests for the furniture and construction industries. But I wasn’t completely stoic. I still appreciated a delicate rose or the sultry melodies wafting from a jazz quartet, while banging my fists on a conference room table. And don’t bother to label me a feminist. I busted the glass ceiling long before the effort became popularized by Gloria Full-of-Bull Steinem in the 70s when she began all her yaah-yaahing. Despite the trend for gender superiority, I had worked with many men, and promoted them as well. I also egged on my latest nemesis—Death himself. Admittedly, while nothing frightened me, Death’s stalking did unnerve me. He would pop up at the oddest places, like outside my home at night. He’d stand under the glowing yellow streetlamp and aim his bloodied sickle at my front door. Sometimes I’d spot him in a mirror standing behind me. Other times he’d appear outside my office as a ghostly apparition hovering above the sidewalk, allowing unperceptive pedestrians to walk right through his dusty blackness. He was an annoying reminder of how I had fewer years ahead than behind, what we all faced. But Death knew not to take me before my time. He’d get his boney ass kicked back to wherever in oblivion from which he came. Even Mister Spookface knew not to mess with this old lady. I did, however, still have to contend with the most irritating people in the world—doctors. You see, I still smoked, and every physician told me time and time again to quit, and to cut the sodium from my meals, and to take my medication, and to inform them about every little hiccup or event, and to. . . Damn doctors. I wasn’t a hundred and eighty-two, you know. When I got to be that old, then I’d show concern. For now, this active woman remained an intrepid participant in my company’s business. Sid’s letter rolled on. A docket has been filed with the clerk of the Charleston County Municipal Court Division seeking to have you declared incompetent . . . There was that word again. Incompetent. Did I sound inept to you? Please contact me at your earliest convenience so that we may meet and strategize our defense, possibly make you a ward of the court . . . Damn my attorney for sending this letter and suggesting he make me a ward of Charleston County. Did he believe I’d allow someone else to make decisions on my behalf? I mean really. I ought to fire his tuchus when I got back home. For now, I was trapped in this goddamn airliner. I hated feeling helpless. The name of the petitioner is Benjamin Hollister Shaw, Jr . . . Yeah. I knew him. If my son thought I’d just roll over like a belly offering puppy, then he had no idea whom he was dealing with. I could promise him one thing. This old lady ain’t goin’ down without a fight.